Piedoom0's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chocolate Space]

Well this was a very happy industrial song...

I liked it overall... it was kind of cliched and boring at some parts though. I loved the way the lead voice was. It sounded so whiny, but in a good way... like a lively way xD. I would dispute this being industrial, though o-O

marlgryd responds:

Thanks for the comment!! I really appreciate it. Yap, the song is indeed quite boring - I totally agree with that, but I was tired, it was late at night, so I just finished where I was and posted.

[xKore - Starve]

neat-o

I really enjoyed this- you took dubstep and made it your own style. It almost sounded 8bit at some parts. Just a hybrid of a lot of crazy stuff makes this unique and enjoyable.
FINISH IT NOUW. I COMMANDETH YOU.

[Pugilator]

wonderful

Just beautifully constructed, all around wonderful. I loved the beginning, middle, and end. You should know I rarely give out 10 stars. Thanks for uploading this wonderful piece.
...and FLS ftw.

RunningShadows responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much as to give it a 10. I am quite honored. FLS is win.

[[sc] silent monolith]

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when it was over... I was all "NUHHH I MUST KNOW HOW THIS PROGRESSES."
It sounded like you were creating a song to go along with a book.
I really want you to go ahead and make this longer, I bet it will be pretty awesome.

SilentCortex responds:

the answer lies within your silent self.....
just use your imagination for this is only the beginning........
-sc-

[[dj-Jo] 3 Towers (Synergy Mix)]

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pretty cool :D Actually got chills at the 0:18 drum cut-in. You changed up the rhythm and style enough for it to be a bit refreshing, though I wish you would have changed the melody as well (although since this is a remix, I'm not sure if you were allowed to.) Additionally, when you held the lead voices for a long time, I wish you added some modulation to them instead of the pitch just being lifeless. Other than that, I loved the concept and ESPECIALLY the drums. Good luck on the contest as well.

dj-Jo responds:

About the modulation...
Thats not a bad idea :D

Thanks for the constructive criticism as well

Also, bout the melody, I tried not to keep too fair away from the original so that's why it's the way it is.

Thanks again for the review
It always helps!

[Krowe - Lost]

cool :D

I really liked the chords, especially their voices. They sounded so ethereal and mysterious. As for the lead square-ish voice, It was alright at first... but I wish you modulated it (like the cutoff or pitch or even dynamics) while doing the song to make it feel more emotional. I didn't care for the drum sounds either, but that's probably just my personal tastes. I really hope you finish this one, though. As the reviewer above me said, there's tons of potential to capitalize on here.

[Dumb 'n' Bass WIP]

Perhaps it's just me being harsh...

You certainly have a ways to go- the song was too bland for my tastes, though I liked the different effects you put into it. The song is in severe lack of a distinguishable melody voice.

DENT-de-lion responds:

YOU ARE THE HARSHEST PERSON ON THIS HARSH EARTH!

[Kokiri Forest [Ocarina]]

woot

you have some awesome Ocarina skills o-o
Although this is a wonderful demonstration, it lacks enough voices and parts in my opinion to be in the video game category- I'd list this in misc or ambient... Otherwise, neat job on this.

Ocarina-Kid responds:

Haha I wouldn't say awesome but thanks man! I've never really thought about putting it in another category since it's video game related but what you said certainly makes sense, cheers for pointing that out! Thanks for the review :)

[Systremo - Still Awake]

o-o

That was pretty awesome. Though you really didn't change the main melody, you kept it changing and interesting. The bass-line was amazing and I loved your choice of sounds. My only complaint is that I wish you added some reverb to the drums, they sounded a little out of place.

Systremo responds:

Thx man :D I feel like the melody should have been changed much more but i didnt find the right way to do it :P I agree that reverbing the drums could have been better and it feels stupid that I didnt think of that when i made it >.<

[Transposed Night for Piano]

yayz

Great job on this piece :D I just wish it weren't a midi, - if it had full dynamics, I'd give you a 10/10. Anyway this doesn't really feel like Classical, it's really more of a modern/contemporary piece. I think Newgrounds closest equivalent to that would be ambient, but I may be overlooking something.
Just thinking, your piece sounds a lot like Eric Satie and his Gymnopedies, are you familiar with him? If not I'd pull him up and take a look.

Slaytesics responds:

I'm familiar with him, my friend commissioned me to write this piece in the style of Erik Satie